Monday, May 03, 2004

More writing:

Blue, a blue car.
 
Appearing as the faintest hint, a premonition, just around the corner. The light is blue, the sky is blue, the world is beautiful, idyllic. No need to see the blue car, but it�s there, at the edge of my vision, nagging at me. Then, in slow motion, almost inevitably, emerging. A sound of steel against steel, and�
 
this is not happening.

Comments


Amazing.

Still catching my breath. Reading it, I felt like I was tumbling, falling…from color to color to color. It felt like I took about 15 seconds to read the whole thing, so I went back and read it again. Same thing. But I didn’t miss a word.

Amazing.

Mary @ 08:07 AM | 2004/05/04

It sent shivers down my spine… beautiful in a sad way. Makes me not want to let Naomi near a car ever, for some reason.

Kyle @ 09:44 AM | 2004/05/05

Very nice, and very chilling. I read the story, but the excerpt stands on its own. This is my favorite work of yours, Yukino.

David @ 03:10 PM | 2004/05/10

Thank you so much!

yukino @ 02:47 AM | 2004/05/15

I have read it several times. With months in between.
And by the time I reach yellow, I shiver. Every time.

sjon @ 11:24 PM | 2005/09/14

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